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DANCE OF THE BLUE

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Submitted Date 06/02/2019
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I was created long ago,

Doing this dance since the beginning.

The eyes for hours gaze at me,

Longer than snow.

 

I give creatures a home.

Treasures lay hidden.

Treasures miniature, large, wondrous,

Others forbidden.

 

I move on your feet,

And back again.

Making it cool,

No longer dry.

 

My color is nature's hue,

Pleasing to the eyes

I dance on cue.

Been here since the beginning of time.

 

I'm vast and deep

Also blue.

I am the dance of the ocean.

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  • Ceara 4 years, 11 months ago

    I have a deep love for the ocean and I love this description of it! Thanks for sharing.

  • David Ross Washington Jr 4 years, 11 months ago

    This is very creative, and beautiful. I always think about reincarnation from souls of humans into animals or bugs, but I never thought about the soul of an element. Very interesting.

  • No name 4 years, 11 months ago

    This is not always easy to do and you did an admirable job!

  • Alexander 4 years, 10 months ago

    Short and sweet, but I want more! haha Nice job.