GOODBYE GIRL

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Submitted Date 08/08/2019
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with the coldest of eyes I can melt away to a place far from here yet I'll never stay on the goodbye girl or so I've been told

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  • Ceara 4 years, 7 months ago

    This feels like a great start for a longer poem. I'm intrigued about the girl and her circumstances and what's happening to her. Thanks for sharing!