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My heart and soul bleed just to look at you
So oblivious to the full potential within you
Content with such a simple life
And the darkness just outside your heart and mind's door
The past hurts echo in the cracks right down to your core
But you are meant for so much more
A life full of healing is what I wish for you
To rise fully above the mess and never backslide into
To know someone truly loves you for you
Who will support you and encourage you
Forever there, forever true
For if you ever read this, you would scroll right past for sure
But I hope one day you'll understand
That I see so much more than a broken man
And I know one day that you'll know for sure
That you are meant for so much more
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To rise fully above the mess and never backslide into
I think this is my favorite line, I can clearly see this in my head. This poem is so thoughtful and hopeful. Beautiful sentiment. -
What a beautiful poem.I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.
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Thank you, Kiersten.
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And the darkness just outside your heart and mind's door The past hurts echo in the cracks right down to your core But you are meant for so much more
This is so beautiful. Understanding someone's hurt, but knowing they are better than that, and have so much potential.-
Thank you, David.
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To know someone truly loves you for you Who will support you and encourage you Forever there, forever true
This is what love is truly about. Beautiful poem-
Yep, I think that line speaks no matter if you're talking to a friend or a significant other.
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Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, Miranda.
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Thank you, Ceara.