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INNER SCREAMS

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Submitted Date 04/22/2019
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I have to hold the screams inside me
Wanting to scream for you until my throat is numb
Wishing I knew where you are my friend
And why you had to go
Wishing you could hear me
So you know I still care
Feeling worlds apart
'Cause I'm here and you're there
Still, I know one day I'll hear from you
I know you'll come back to me
So in the meantime, I will sit here
Waiting patiently

 

 

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  • David Ross Washington Jr 4 years, 12 months ago

    This is so beautiful, and can relate to people and disconnected friendships in so many ways.

    • Carrie Lowrance 4 years, 12 months ago

      Thank you, David. It's like my heart opens and everything comes gushing out.

  • Ceara 4 years, 12 months ago

    This is very raw and open. Thank you for sharing

  • Jared Clawson 4 years, 12 months ago

    Beautiful as always. Thanks for sharing

  • Alisa Guttadauro 4 years, 12 months ago

    Another great one, Carrie; Raw, and down to earth.

  • Tomas Chough 4 years, 11 months ago

    I can think of countless inner screams I've had inside me. This is so relatable. Great picture too. Thanks for sharing Carrie!

  • No name 4 years, 11 months ago

    I love the diversity in your writing, what a powerful poem

  • Miranda Fotia 4 years, 11 months ago

    Great poem! Very relatable! Love the title too!

  • Nina Appasamy 4 years, 11 months ago

    This is a powerful poem.

    • Carrie Lowrance 4 years, 11 months ago

      Thank you, Nina. Honestly, my heart just opened up and hemorrhaged.