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THE FICTIONS OF TIME

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Submitted Date 05/30/2019
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(*I used a screenshot of my poem so that I could keep the original formatting.*)

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  • David Ross Washington Jr 4 years, 10 months ago

    This is so wonderfully beautiful crafted. The metaphors are sublime. I love how the last lines. Often times the fantasy is much more interesting than the truth. Fantasy is often where many people hide. The truth is hard to be because you have to face yourself, and that may not be the image everyone saw for themselves.

  • No name 4 years, 10 months ago

    Beautiful, both the poem an the photo you chose.