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Private Notes
Private Notes
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I think about you all day and dream about you every night.
Why is it so hard to tell you how I feel.
When I'm gone the anticipation of seeing you is hard to pass away.
So here I am again not knowing what to say.
Which made all the fears of seeing you slowly go away.
I love the way you look, how unknown your pages are.
The explorer in my heart wants to find out who you are.
So l can bestow on you all my hopes and all my dreams.
I will need you to keep them all hidden, only seen by you and me.
If you don't help me in any other way please help me hide them from the crazy world around me.
Take my words an keep them with you always.
No one will ever know me as you do.
Another page is sure to come, but you will be the very first you.
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So l can bestow on you all my hopes and all my dreams. I will need you to keep them all hidden, only seen by you and me. If you don't help me in any other way please help me hide them from the crazy world around me. Take my words an keep them with you always.
Such a heart-felt poem, and I love this part. They say keep your dreams, aspirations, and vulnerable thoughts to yourself and/or people that will cherish them because others will try to tear them down, so this is so lovely to hear in this poem. It's true. Share your world with people that will help you build it, nor tear it down. -
This is super cute, I love it!
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Thank you!
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This is such a fun piece! I love the thinking about a paper this way.
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Thank you very much
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Such a creative way of describing that new notebook excitement. Nice work!!
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I love this! I feel the same way about paper. I literally cannot walk by the notebook section in a store without having the strong urge to buy another one to add to my collection. An empty piece of paper/notebook holds so much promise.
Thank you! That's my favorite line.