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ON "PERFECT" LOVE

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Submitted Date 01/20/2019
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we never told each other
"you're perfect"
but we loved nonetheless

we wrapped dandelion cocoons
around our wounds
until we blossomed: butterflies

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  • Rick Doble 5 years, 1 month ago

    Great line "we never told each other "you're perfect" " -- thinking that love is perfect is a recipe for disaster -- there can only be disappointment and a downhill slide -- if you start with 'perfect'

  • Tomas Chough 5 years, 1 month ago

    You managed to make it interesting and creative even though it's so short. Great job and thanks or sharing!