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LITTLE SPARROW LOVE
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He walks in wonder
At my smallness
At my sparrow feet
And I love to feel his arms
Roll me into the crook of his bend like a sheet of butcher paper
Or a map, snapped back to the ceiling
By an excited professor
If I tilt my head just right
Like a dog asking for scraps
Forehead will brush his stubble
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This is beautiful. The vulnerability of love.
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I love how the title adds another layer to this poem.
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Thank you Kiersten!
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Great way of describing the feeling. I like the comparison. Nice work Zoe!
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Thanks Tomas!
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I love the way it starts and the part about a dog begging for scraps. Great piece!
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Thank you, glad that line spoke to you!
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He walks in wonderAt my smallnessAt my sparrow feet
Beautiful way to start! Really engages the reader immediately. Thanks for sharing!-
Thank you so much!
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The vulnerability of love indeed! Thank you!