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WHAT I FOUND THAT DAY

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Submitted Date 03/20/2019
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I look for you but I cannot find you

Look look, here it goes

I am searching for you

The leaves fall, the grass withers

Under under she goes

Turning sour like a unformed answer

I am bitter but I am-

Looking for you

Is it underneath the wind?

A shadowy surprise?

And all the while I look straight ahead and see your face

What a journey it’s been

To finally close the book that’s been home

And I find you staring back at me right where I pictured destiny’d be

You’re what I was looking for

In a friend

In a short poem

Its what I find with ease

And all the while it’s been you.

Time

What an unsuspected treasure

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  • Tomas Chough 5 years, 1 month ago

    Great poem Nikki! Time is not only an unexpected treasure, but I think it's one of the most valuable things in this life. Thanks for sharing!

    • nikki tayebian 5 years, 1 month ago

      Thanks Tomas! I'm glad you enjoyed it and really value your feedback!

  • Miranda Fotia 5 years, 1 month ago

    Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing!

  • David Ross Washington Jr 5 years, 1 month ago

    This is lovely. At 1st I thought it was going to be a sad poem , morning the loss of someone, then it turned around to something else.

  • No name 5 years ago

    This is gorgeous. I really feel with the narrator. "You’re what I was looking for In a friend In a short poem"