ME AND HIM

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Submitted Date 07/03/2019
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Ally gracefully makes her way to the bottom of the steps. She felt nervous but that's probably pretty normal. She felt flashes of light before she could even look up.

(Changing to first person pov)

"Aww, my baby is all grown up!" I heard my mom cry out. My boyfriend Christan stood behind my dad. Holding a single pink rose. My favorite. I couldn't help but smile. Not just because of the flower or what's going on tonight but because he's right in front of me. I haven't seen him in months since he had to leave for college. It's never been the same after he left. However he's here with me at this very moment. Chris ,his nickname, made his way towards me. I pull my arms around his neck. He held me strongly in his arms. I wanted so badly to Barry my face in his jacket but I didn't want to mess his suit up. "You look beautiful" he whispers in my ear. I felt heat rise to my cheeks. My light pink dress flowed to the back of my calf. I love this dress. "Thank you for coming Chris" I say looking away from his face. I know just in a few days that he's just going to have to leave again. "Ally, I wanted to come. I want to be here for you" his words cut deep in my heart. I know he loves me. I know he wants me but when he's away it's like he's just gone. "Please don't make me cry" I say and he uses his hand to lift my face to meet his eyes. I bite my lip. I wanted his lips on mine. I suddenly felt a flash of light reminding me we have to go. "Mom, that's enough pictures" I say she sighs. "Fine" she finally agrees. I make my way with Chris to his truck. My hand held in his hand. He helps me into his truck and I make sure my dress doesn't get caught in the door. He closes the door and makes his way to his side. "Have fun at prom!" I hear my mom shout. "Not to much fun!" My dad says correcting mom.

We pull into the venue. With the car parked Chris makes his way to my door and opens the door for me. He holds out his hand and I smile taking his hand. He catches me as I trip and his arms are around my waiste. I wrap my arm around his neck again. "I've missed you so much chris" I say and you could hear the raw emotions coming through my voice. "I've missed you to but you don't want to miss your prom babe" Chris says and I could tell he didn't actually want to let go of me. Chris and I head into prom with our hand intertwined. My nervousness was gone.

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  • David Ross Washington Jr 4 years, 8 months ago

    Tender young love is so beautiful.

  • No name 4 years, 8 months ago

    This is so sweet! I do think that you should break paragraphs for dialogue! A quick google search can teach you the best way for that, and it makes reading it so much easier!

  • No name 4 years, 8 months ago

    This is so sweet! I do think that you should break paragraphs for dialogue! A quick google search can teach you the best way for that, and it makes reading it so much easier!