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WHO WAS HE (POEM)
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He was once such a nice guy,
but they took him for granted,
the way his soul used to dance,
so that his physical being would speak in such enchantment,
as he was freer than a rainbow,
No leprechaun to steal his pot of Gold,
as he would glisten,
sparkling down, nourishing rain drops,
parading blankets snugged wealth in love to those he used wrap his arms around,
when once their love knew no ends,
as they would flourish like a Dove,
covered up his third eye,
The passion he had to see the world,
an unconditional view,
Had been blinded by toxin's that only a relationship could spew,
They questioned his character,
As they tried to taint his spirit,
It was a reaction they seek,
But he would not bow down to his knees,
He heard this tale before,
and he didn't want to be in the ending credits,
And oh!
What a turn of events,
It was a page written by him,
an autobiography,
Sincerely, signed, and published,
David,
Silly for them to try,
but they will not own,
Knight shines,
Dirt shall not vanquish a King.
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"as he was freer than a rainbow" I love this line. You're poetry is amazing!
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They questioned his character,As they tried to taint his spirit,It was a reaction they seek,But he would not bow down to his knees,
This is great. Keep that spirit strong David. Thanks for sharing!-
Thank you. I really appreciate it. You're welcome. Glad I could share some of myself and story.
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David, this is a great piece. I feel like it tells of the changes made in so many by the reactions and mistreatments of others. Too many have turned away from who they once were because of a destructive society that values conformity more than uniqueness. Thank you for sharing.
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Everything you said is so true, and exactly what the story of this poem is about and represents. You're welcome. Glad to share my story and have people appreciate it.
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and he didn't want to be in the ending credits
That’s good imagery. I like your writing.-
Thank you so much James.
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I was to drawn to this poem and i felt it deeply..." he didn't want to be in the ending credits" very well written
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I was to drawn to this poem and i felt it deeply..." he didn't want to be in the ending credits" very well written
Aww thanks. Arganise.