WITH ALL THE LOVE IN THE WORLD

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With all the love in the world

People say wait for the one to all the boys and girls

With all the love in the world

We have tinder and bumble to help find our new score

With all the love in the world

Why does love endure

 

I been waiting

I been wanting

I see these hot girls and relationships

but none of them would want a guy like me

 

I'm just some normal guy

Everyone tells me different

but they dont know my life

Everone thinks I can Change the world through music

but how does that help my side

 

Yeah I get it

I'm cool

I'm chill

I'm define the rules and bend them

but I don't consider myself a bad type of guy

I find myself rebelious ut that doesn't mean I smoke weed and drink all the time

 

Why does every girl I know like thse type of guys

I just wish I was still with what was mine

I guess I'm the plain no one would ask for

I'm the guy that gets no girl

the forever alone that loves to much of love

but at the end of the day hurts

maybe thats what I was made for

 

I do better at pairing others then Pairing myself

I'm the living tinder

but I can't figure it all out

Everyone tells people to shoot their shot

but I miss so much that not even the word alot can define the amount of missed shots

 

Maybe Now a days

Females don't want a honest, truthful guy

Maybe Now a days

Females don't want the innocent black guy who doesn't say "gang gang"

or doesn't crip walk on the street

Maybe now a days

I need to realise it's time to change my type cause I'm not gonna be what I'm not

in the course of time

 

With all the love in the world

People say wait for the one to all the boys and girls

With all the love in the world

We have tinder and bumble to help find our new score

With all the love in the world

Why does love endure

With all the Love

In the world

Why am I struggling

when everyone around me sounds like love

is an open door

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  • Carrie Lowrance 5 years, 1 month ago

    This was a great poem. I remember feeling this way when I was much younger. Othello, don't change anything about you. You sound like an amazing, unique person and one day the right girl will be delighted to be with you.

  • David Ross Washington Jr 5 years, 1 month ago

    I need to realise it
    So important. Never change who you are to appease people that can't see how great you are were/are. This was such a beautiful piece OThello.

  • Jared Clawson 5 years, 1 month ago

    Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing! As a high schooler, it's easy for me to see this all around. People think that they need to live up to others' expectations or change themselves to be more liked, but it's so not true. If you do that, then it's just vain love. Just be yourself because somewhere there's someone who admires you for who you are.

  • Ceara 5 years, 1 month ago

    You have a really strong message, thank you for sharing! There are several spelling mistakes and I personally think maybe a little more imagery to really create a more visual response could be nice.

  • No name 5 years, 1 month ago

    My best response is maybe don't refer to women as "Females". Don't worry though, as we grow and mature we find what we are looking for. Don't blame other people for not finding love, but don't blame yourself. There is no blame to be had, because we all grow and meet new people and everyone feels alone at one point or another.

  • Tomas Chough 5 years, 1 month ago

    Thanks a lot for sharing your experience and thoughts. It's not always easy to open up but I think it's a great way to process these things. Keep it up!

  • Miranda Fotia 5 years ago

    Beautiful poem!