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WITH ALL THE LOVE IN THE WORLD
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With all the love in the world
People say wait for the one to all the boys and girls
With all the love in the world
We have tinder and bumble to help find our new score
With all the love in the world
Why does love endure
I been waiting
I been wanting
I see these hot girls and relationships
but none of them would want a guy like me
I'm just some normal guy
Everyone tells me different
but they dont know my life
Everone thinks I can Change the world through music
but how does that help my side
Yeah I get it
I'm cool
I'm chill
I'm define the rules and bend them
but I don't consider myself a bad type of guy
I find myself rebelious ut that doesn't mean I smoke weed and drink all the time
Why does every girl I know like thse type of guys
I just wish I was still with what was mine
I guess I'm the plain no one would ask for
I'm the guy that gets no girl
the forever alone that loves to much of love
but at the end of the day hurts
maybe thats what I was made for
I do better at pairing others then Pairing myself
I'm the living tinder
but I can't figure it all out
Everyone tells people to shoot their shot
but I miss so much that not even the word alot can define the amount of missed shots
Maybe Now a days
Females don't want a honest, truthful guy
Maybe Now a days
Females don't want the innocent black guy who doesn't say "gang gang"
or doesn't crip walk on the street
Maybe now a days
I need to realise it's time to change my type cause I'm not gonna be what I'm not
in the course of time
With all the love in the world
People say wait for the one to all the boys and girls
With all the love in the world
We have tinder and bumble to help find our new score
With all the love in the world
Why does love endure
With all the Love
In the world
Why am I struggling
when everyone around me sounds like love
is an open door
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This was a great poem. I remember feeling this way when I was much younger. Othello, don't change anything about you. You sound like an amazing, unique person and one day the right girl will be delighted to be with you.
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I need to realise it
So important. Never change who you are to appease people that can't see how great you are were/are. This was such a beautiful piece OThello. -
Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing! As a high schooler, it's easy for me to see this all around. People think that they need to live up to others' expectations or change themselves to be more liked, but it's so not true. If you do that, then it's just vain love. Just be yourself because somewhere there's someone who admires you for who you are.
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You have a really strong message, thank you for sharing! There are several spelling mistakes and I personally think maybe a little more imagery to really create a more visual response could be nice.
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My best response is maybe don't refer to women as "Females". Don't worry though, as we grow and mature we find what we are looking for. Don't blame other people for not finding love, but don't blame yourself. There is no blame to be had, because we all grow and meet new people and everyone feels alone at one point or another.
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Thanks a lot for sharing your experience and thoughts. It's not always easy to open up but I think it's a great way to process these things. Keep it up!
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Beautiful poem!