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DESOLATION: A SONG'S END
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The messenger's burden warbles a labyrinthine chorus
against the breeze that lifts the hairs of nature's bonnet,
drowning all words, murmurs and clamors, in a green rustle.
The ballad crescendoes, the keen, biting whisper
growing mountainous against the eerie, azure storm.
Then, the melancholic, joyous anthem suddenly ceases.
A silence, more racketous than a shattering sun,
screeches its way into the hearts of magpies
who move their wings over their ears, pressing hard,
blinking as tears descend their snowy, charcoal cheeks,
masking them in an imaginary, gleaming fog.
They choke, they gasp, they shudder, they weep,
yet it is all for naught. The tune is done, gone:
the shimmering sunlight stunned the story into oblivion,
and now, no adventure will ever dare to return.
Forever, only quiet will remain amidst the cascading cinders
where infinity once danced before it was extinguished
in the dishonest zephyrs.
There is not an echo, nor a reflection, nor an odor to sense.
The light left a void so desolate it strangled the courier's heart.
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What stunning imagery and excellent word choices! Thank you for sharing!
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They choke, they gasp, they shudder, they weep,yet it is all for naught. The tune is done, gone:the shimmering sunlight stunned the story into oblivion,and now, no adventure will ever dare to return.
Great poem. I particularly liked how intense this part is. Nice work!!-
Thanks, Tomas! :)
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The words definitely add a flow to it that helps overall. I like it!
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Thank you, Kiersten! :)
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Forever, only quiet will remain amidst the cascading cinderswhere infinity once danced before it was extinguished
Loved these lines. This words of this poem were wonderfully woven together.-
Thanks, David! :)
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Beautiful piece!
Thank you, Ceara! :)