Submitted Date 09/03/2022

Demons Pray


When she walks in she has much to say

She's a complex blend of ice and fire

You best bow down; don't get in her way

Crossing her will only increase her desire


She fights on her feet; never falls to her knees

A ferocious woman she may portray

Dare to betray her and hell with freeze

The power inside her will make demons pray



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  • Jacqueline Hemingway 1 year, 9 months ago

    Wow, I have to say it isn’t everyday that another writer gets me thinking the way you do. I have just read all your works here, and you my dear have a gift that I hope you exercise more than what is posted here. I look forward to reading more of your perfunctory prose. Well done Lillian!

    • Lillian Shaw 1 year, 9 months ago

      Jackie, Thank you so very much! I am actually writing a poetry book of my life. I have tons of work and only share some. I will share some more here and I am happy to discuss writing and poetry with you sometime if you would like? Lilly.

    • Jacqueline Hemingway 1 year, 9 months ago

      Lilly, I await more of your works. I enjoy very much discussing the art craft of writing that we both share. I often find it inspiring and refreshing. I look forward to this.

    • Lillian Shaw 1 year, 9 months ago

      I look forward to speaking with you further as well. I will try and connect on here. I'm learning to use Writespike as far as making connections.