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A QUIET MOMENT
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some children were playing in the corner
cooing and babbling with each other
there was a table with several toys
designed to rage war against the senses
it was all very noisy
the wind outside was gusting at 65 miles per hour
and fighting with the cooing children
to see who could be the loudest
a young boy walked up to his father
with a little wooden horse in his hands
the father asked, "How does the horsey go?"
I suspect if the horse had any sense at all
it would go in the opposite direction
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I suspect if the horse had any sense at allit would go in the opposite direction
The last 2 lines are very interesting. So many ways you can perceive that. -
Yes, I go to coffee shops a lot just to sit and clear my head but sometimes they are a bit loud and it throws me off.
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Haha!!! A bunch of kids at the coffee shop sounds like a hell of a time.
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there was a table with several toysdesigned to rage war against the senses
Love the wording here. Funny ending too :)